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Unpacking

 

We used to live in packed societies:

Packed trains, packed clubs, packed shoulder to shoulder,

The crowd squeezed in and sniffing next door’s sweat.

Think back : no room to pass on the pavement.

 

From now on the word is to move apart,

Keep everyone out of touching distance,

Disinfect at will, no song or shouting,

Forbidden seating, air hellos and bows.

 

Our use of capacity will plummet,

Say buffs and academics in the know;

But those who once filled up vacated space,

What will become of them? Where will they go?

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◄ These Drawings

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 24th Jul 2021 17:45

Thank you, Aviva.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 12th Jul 2021 17:35

Thank you, Ruth and K.J. I'm sure your were right, even though we lost! I suddenly had this idea that if society has to operate at half-capacity for a while longer, what happens to the other half who used to fill it up? Maybe they are doing something else, instead of 'packing in'. But what is it?

And thanks to Jordyn, Rudyard, Holden and Your Royal Poetess for the likes.

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kJ Walker

Sun 11th Jul 2021 10:22

Good point.

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Ruth O'Reilly

Sat 10th Jul 2021 21:25

Great poem Stephen really
captures the mood of the moment! No one will be distanced if we win tomorrow though all that will be totally forgotten ?

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