Donations are essential to keep Write Out Loud going    

Old Dancers

 

A tango, a foxtrot, a waltz :

They danced until the night had gone.

This was, by now, their greatest love,

But not their consuming passion.

That stopped years ago : a booze-up,

A handshake and out of the door.

All efforts of return rebuffed.

So now they twinkle starrily

Around the glitter in the halls,

Their sunset years a rare campaign,

A chance to live their lives again,

Until the stiffness and first falls.

🌷(7)

◄ Unpacking

Ancient History ►

Comments

Profile image

Stephen Gospage

Sat 24th Jul 2021 17:44

Thanks also to Jennifer for the like.

Profile image

Stephen Gospage

Tue 13th Jul 2021 15:57

Thank you Rudyard for the kind comment and thanks to Greg, Julie, Holden and Pete for the likes.

It often happens that post-retirement activities are enjoyable but do not take the place of work and all that goes with it. I have changed line 4 which I now think works slightly better.

Thanks again to everyone.

<Deleted User> (27399)

Mon 12th Jul 2021 18:33

I like it, very nice indeed.

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message