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Sighs of Miles

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Sighs, shorten the miles
Where my beloved smoothly lies
Move me away over his side
Leave no trace behind,

Get me beyond this wall
Into his embrace make me fall
Shut out time, when  approach
Hypnotize ticking seconds of the watch,

Invade each beat of heart
Grant me once the right
Chase sanity in me out
Along with his guts, let it unite,

Shining path, endlessly wide
Only a touch, and we combine
A soul can live a thousand times
In this eternal love divine.

◄ Junk-Pot-Lady

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<Deleted User> (8943)

Sun 3rd Apr 2011 17:12

This is wonderful, so heady, I am caught up in the desire to be near "him"

Thank you...

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jean lucy thompson

Tue 24th Aug 2010 20:11

Really beautiful Mirna; I liked that very much :)

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 23rd Aug 2010 11:17

This 'tumbling words' style is very nerve-catching, definitely setting a pervasive mood. Perhaps no punctuation would be better than only some, since punctuation steers ideas, and I'm not sure these flashes of thought should be guided. I think you have a great skill with 'word music' throughout all your lines.
If you are the least interested, you might check out 'Girl in a Lake' which I posted some time back (2009, but close to the end of the year.)

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Andy N

Tue 3rd Aug 2010 08:11

close to a song in bits this i think and i found myself trying to work out what instruments would suit it also.

nice stuff! x

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