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Unit of Measure

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I’ve heard the human soul

weighs 21 grams or so

Not so in my experience!

 

All those I miss the most

weigh much heavier on me

 

My mind sees their souls

as impossible to lift some days,

because of the burden of their absence

 

Heavy lifting - as if 21 grams

were as I imagine it might weigh

in the dark heart of a crushing black hole

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Stephanie Sampson

Sun 10th Oct 2021 06:10

A beautiful take on the 21 grams - thank you for sharing.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 9th Oct 2021 17:49

Interesting piece, Mike.

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