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Leaf Blower

 

A middle-aged man nearby

Is clearing up some leaves.

He swings the blower round;

Enjoys its phallic whirl.

It reminds him of the time

When he could get the girl.

Ego LB6504 Power+ 650 CFM Blower

◄ Boy Dancer

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Rasa Kabaila

Mon 8th Nov 2021 22:04

This is beautiful Stephen. It's such an art to be able to write a short poem that brings out so many emotions. I love this poem because it is playful and sweet and provides some genuine romanticism to what otherwise might be seen as 'ordinary day to day tasks'.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 7th Nov 2021 18:01

And thanks to Julie and Pete.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 5th Nov 2021 17:39

Yes, alternative titles are available, John. And the alternative product is a rake, which is not a great way to end up and which makes slow progress. I suppose there is a theme of disappearing youth in this somewhat trivial verse.

Telboy - I feel you pain. It happened to us once.

Thanks to MC, Jordyn, Stephen A, Aisha and Holden for the likes.

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Telboy

Fri 5th Nov 2021 08:07

It's a most unselfish act, to share your leaves with your neighbours.

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John Coopey

Thu 4th Nov 2021 18:23

Leave it out, Stephen! It’s the only blow-job I can get these days!

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