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Rhythm

 

There’s a rhythm to the morning:

A rhythm of insects and birds,

A rhythm of running water,

A rhythm of early rising,

A rhythm rich in such delights,

Not in any way surprising.

 

There’s a rhythm to the daytime:

A beat of plausibility,

A rhythm of passing and drift,

A pulse of journeys never made,

A shunned availability

Of sunlight and a pledge of shade.

 

There’s a rhythm to the evening;

The sun goes down, the sky withdraws,

The house lights dim, the byways cool,

Late games in parks come to a halt.

For some, the terror of the night

Is wrapped around dreams dark and fraught.

◄ Leaf Blower

The word is love ►

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 19th Nov 2021 16:56

Thank you, Ray. I seem to remember that Peter Sellers did a mean George Formby impersation.

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raypool

Fri 19th Nov 2021 16:49

Nicely done Stephen! Maybe rhythm is so satisfying in music because it is part and parcel of natural cycles. As Peter Sellers once said with ukelele in hand: " rhythm and melody, that's what the public want and by jove that's what i'll give them" or similar.

Ray

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 19th Nov 2021 15:55

Thanks. I hope I managed to capture both kinds of rhythm in the poem! Many thanks for the comment and the like.

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Your Royal Poetess

Wed 17th Nov 2021 17:47

We all create our own rhythms in life, and attract similar rhythms to us ?

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 11th Nov 2021 16:51

Thanks to John and Holden for the positive comments on this poem. My idea had been to link the rhythm of the poem to the ryhthm of life (at least as I see it).

And thanks to Hugh, New Shoes, Jordyn, Bramwell, Julie, Pete and Kelvin for liking the poem.

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John Coopey

Tue 9th Nov 2021 18:49

The rhythm of the poem is the perfect vehicle for this eternal rhythm of life.

Holden Moncrieff

Mon 8th Nov 2021 23:00

There's also a great rhythm in this poem!? And everyday truths lyrically expressed ?.

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