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Haunted by Passchendaele

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Haunted by Passchendaele

In France, at the height of the horror

He had taken two days to climb out of a shell-hole

Leaving his former self, lying in the mud

To return home a mere shadow

Wearing his clothes as a costume

As he masqueraded through what remained of his life

On the 11th November I always remember my Great Uncle Frederick, who died on the battlefield in 1916, my Great Uncle Ernest who  died in 1921 following years of the agony of shell-shock and their nephew Ernest who died on HMS Javelin in 1940.
Also the family of my Uncle Len, whose mother, father and two brothers died when a V1 hit Portsmouth in July 1944, my father aged just 20 had to break this news to his family.
Finally I remember my Great Grandmother and a Great, Great Aunt who both died shortly after the end of WW1, the loss of their sons being just too much to bear.  
Of course each of these losses is far too much to bear.

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Brenda Wells

Sat 13th Nov 2021 18:00

Thank you Stephen G, M.C Newberry and Stephen A, for your kind and thoughtful comments, they are much appreciated.
I hope that remembering such losses, in a collective way, might help to share the pain that they caused.
Ideally the world should find a way of living peaceably but sadly that continues to be out of reach. I live in hope.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 12th Nov 2021 17:57

An almost unbearable tale and poem, Brenda. Thank you for bringing it to us with such skill and feeling.

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M.C. Newberry

Fri 12th Nov 2021 14:55

There was a time when barely any family here in Britain was left
untouched by the Great War - the so-called "war to end all wars". And that horrendous loss still resonates a hundred years
on, finding its awful descendant in WW2....with the same
ghastly source seeking to achieve ascendancy. Little changes
in the ambition that drove two dreadful descents into the abyss.

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 11th Nov 2021 19:39

So much tragedy & heartbreak in one family Brenda. But thanks to this I'm also remembering them ! ❤️

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