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Willow

The trunks of trees, 

Pneumatic tubes

Dispatching sorrows

That fertilized the soil, 

So that leaves get to hear

Of all the human toil

Expended in vain, 

In a monotone

Repetitive refrain. 

 

But the willow, 

Wind-whipped though

It may be, to also

Eavesdrop it persists 

On all those wishes

Saturating the air,

The midnight confidences

Of the nearly-broken

Who may want more

Than what's on offer. 

 

Yet the willow

Knows the end result, 

And for this dissonance, 

In sympathy and amity, 

Wordless, it weeps. 

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Comments

Holden Moncrieff

Sun 14th Nov 2021 03:43

Thank you for the very kind comment, John, I really appreciate it! ?

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John Botterill

Sat 13th Nov 2021 23:25

Wow. This is so powerful and moving.
By the way I am John. Gail's my wife!

Holden Moncrieff

Sat 13th Nov 2021 16:04

Thank you so much, Stephen, I'm honoured you say that! ?

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Stephen Atkinson

Sat 13th Nov 2021 08:55

You are a wonderful wordsmith, Holden. Lovely stuff

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