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Public Gaze

 

Love survived a while, misshapen,

An anchorage in troubled times.

Grind had long warped its perfect form

And watered down its purity

To the blunt level of the street.

Yet it was still love, before bombs

Began to blow us all away.

Then it became a monument

Where people laid down wreathes and wept,

And dodged the bawdy public gaze.

🌷(7) 

â—„ Sleaze

Matchstick Dream â–º

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 23rd Dec 2021 17:38

And my thanks to Pete for the like.

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John Botterill

Sun 19th Dec 2021 10:51

You are very welcome Stephen. 😀
John

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 17th Dec 2021 16:05

Thank you, John. The 'brief history' idea had not occured to me, so many thanks for this comment. Perhaps I will change the title! It seems so right.

And thank you to Branwell, Stephen, Brenda, Holden and John for liking this poem.

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John Botterill

Wed 15th Dec 2021 22:42

A brief history of love. Very clever and highly crafted. Thank you, Stephen.
John Botterill

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