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THE MOORLAND TRAIN

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A re-post celebrating the numerous times we have travelled on the North Yorkhire Moors Railway.  And played with a bit of elementary slide guitar.

 

I hear the train guard’s whistle

The slamming of the doors

The fireman stokes the furnace

For the haul across the moors;

The driver lets some steam off

And sees the train guard’s flag

Then gets those big wheels turning

For the Goathland Drag.

 

You’re leaning from the window

As the platform eases by

There’s thunder ringing in your ears

There’s cinder in your eye;

The sun beats down from Heaven

The clouds then burst with rain;

You’ll witness all four seasons

As you ride the Moorland Train.

 

You smell the smoke and oil

You close your eyes and then

Forget the years of passage

And your twelve years old again;

The sun beats down from Heaven

The clouds then burst with rain;

You’ll witness all four seasons

As you ride the Moorland Train.

 

She’s heaving up the incline

Just hear those pistons sing

We’re due next stop in Goathland

Then on to Pickering;

The sun beats down from Heaven

The clouds then burst with rain;

You’ll witness all four seasons

As you ride the Moorland Train.

◄ SANTA KRAMPUS

FAIRY LIGHTS ►

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John Coopey

Thu 6th Jan 2022 23:12

Many thanks, Tom.

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Tom

Thu 6th Jan 2022 14:39

Ah John, this is brilliant. I loved the audio too.

I've long wanted to write about the North Yorkshire Moors railway. You've even captured my most vivid memory in these two lines:

"You’re leaning from the window
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There’s cinder in your eye"

Wonderful stuff!

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John Coopey

Tue 28th Dec 2021 18:50

Thankyou, Stephen.
And thanks for the Like, Nigel and Kishore.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 28th Dec 2021 17:32

Better than 'Night Mail', I reckon, John.

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John Coopey

Tue 28th Dec 2021 13:04

Thanks, Kevin. I’ve posted my quick-quick-slow poem on here 2 or 3 times already. I don’t want removing for repetition!
And thanks for the Like, John.

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kJ Walker

Tue 28th Dec 2021 11:23

I liked this one John.
It wasn't the one I expected. You do one that starts slow then builds up then slows down again.

Maybe a repost of that one is about due.

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John Coopey

Tue 28th Dec 2021 09:53

Thankyou, Holden. And thanks for the Like, Moonlight.

Holden Moncrieff

Tue 28th Dec 2021 00:34

This is great, John! 😎

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John Coopey

Mon 27th Dec 2021 16:28

Johnny Cash indeed, MC. A better New Year to you too.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 27th Dec 2021 14:43

That's the spirit JC...drive on - and take us with you into 2022 !!!
(And what better initials for a tune from the legendary Man in Black himself?).

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