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Lemur Incident

 

Swift and graceful lemurs
occupy the canopy.
So swift, so beautiful
feet don't touch the ground.
Swift, graceful, beautiful
abreeze through treetops
too many to count. Here's one 
-but wait-
for whatever reason
the accustomed leap
now second nature
still breathtakingly acrobatic
fails. 
He has lost his grip. It happens.
The back-up branch snaps off in his hand
here's a real problem.
Floating out of bounds
free of any reference
leaving all that he has always known
he could be Major fucking Tom.

This is not a good place to be.

This moment caught in amber
his fall made slow motion
by proximity to untold danger
gives to his mind a power 
never experienced before
he is aware of himself as a spirit of the forest.
Whatever the outcome
he appreciates his position
the position of a lemur
such as he could not before.

 

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Comments

<Deleted User> (34685)

Mon 2nd Jan 2023 21:08

👍 poem Adam. These guys are so comical to watch skipping and jumping along but thank god for them and all of the beautiful animals we are blessed with

LS

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John Botterill

Wed 2nd Feb 2022 16:41

I could be wrong ( it's been known!) but I sense an analogy here!
Terrific 'gripping' writing, Adam.

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