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Mariner

The margins of the mariner differ:

while people of the land wither, 

he makes friends with the waves

peopled by gods, trusting his

compass in cahoots with the North, 

hoping the Old Man of the Sea

stays sufficiently appeased 

to send his Nereids in aid,

should the voyage be in peril.

 

The scorecard of the sailor differs:

all it has to check

is how oft he conversed

as honestly as can be

with Selene, lucent

queen of the firmament, 

and trusted as guides

the gracious stars

in her regiment. 

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Comments

Holden Moncrieff

Tue 22nd Feb 2022 01:26

Thank you so much, John and Stephen, your comments are always greatly appreciated! 😊

Stephen, I wasn't thinking of it so much as a contrast in the second verse, but perhaps a more introspective aspect of a seafarer's journey. 😊

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 21st Feb 2022 08:07

Interesting contrast of mariner and sailor, Holden. Two sides of the same person, I suppose?

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John Botterill

Mon 21st Feb 2022 07:53

A fascinating poem, Holden. We don't think of the different problems encountered by those at sea. We'll, I don't. Really made me think, thank you!

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