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THOUGHT BUBBLE

Take a thought bubble strip it of its skin

until it fills the whole space of your mind

examine its components

 

describe them in a palace of time

wrap those images in words write them on paper

you've captured that bubble in poetry. 

 

Walk away: it remains to nag you

with its shiny or tawdry ego

bursting with love or hate

 

but hopefully not indifference

for if so then it will have floundered

your bubble pricked and collapsed. 

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◄ WE MAKE A SHOULDER OF THE WIND

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raypool

Thu 10th Mar 2022 10:37

Thank you Aisha and Holden for liking this.

True enough Stephen, glad you liked it.

Ray

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 25th Feb 2022 17:08

I think writing them down is the key, Ray. It's so easy to forget. Good poem.

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