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The morning after

the last hope gone, we find ourselves in sunshine

with family in Marbella beside a fountain sculpture

of beauty and unity, reflecting civic pride,

what might have been, playing with our

 

Anglo-Spanish grandchild on the swings and slides.

She careers across the pavement on a little bike,

I struggle to keep up with her, and as I screw

my features into laughter faces, she mimics every one.

 

She calls the motorway tunnels along the Costa del Sol

the big dark.  That evening the people

of the barrio sing carols beneath our flat, with guitars,

harmonies, their brazier a beckoning beacon, bright.

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Greg Freeman

Thu 3rd Mar 2022 08:59

Thanks for your comments, Steve.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 2nd Mar 2022 17:59

I had seen this in your book, Greg, and the last line shines out more than ever. The EU is not perfect (what is?) but we need a United Europe more than ever and the unity expressed up to now is very impressive.

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 2nd Mar 2022 15:56

The EU's total countries comprise of a considerably greater land
mass and absorbent capability for large numbers of people than
these islands which - in hectares - France alone exceeds by
"X 3" !. I remain unsurprised that similar views emanate from
those with certain European "connections".

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Greg Freeman

Wed 2nd Mar 2022 09:59

It's funny how the meaning of poems can change over time. I wrote this the day after the 2019 British election result that confirmed Brexit. I accept that the whole issue of Brexit is over now. But I looked at the last line of this poem - "their brazier a beckoning beacon, bright" - and I thought of the EU's generous approach to Ukraine refugees, and compared it with the UK's, and the EU's uncompromising approach to Russia, compared with the UK's slowness in cracking down on oligarchs, for whatever reason. And how Ukraine wants to join the EU. And I'm sorry, but I felt proud of that last line, and believe it still to be true.

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