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Rain

When the rain stops, and the clouds part,

We venture out to take a look,

And for one brief moment wallow

In some space of blessed respite.

A shower has freshened up this place;

The violent mist has melted

Into compost’s damp aroma,

Birdsong breaks the tuneless silence.

The lives not lived, through their absence,

Remind us of the dry prelude,

Crackling in heat and noise and pain.

No deluge washes this away.

Only love, sprinkled with diamonds,

And faith, unshakable, does that.

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Ukraine

◄ Mariupol

'Grieving Ukrainian Mother' (As seen on TV) ►

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 15th Apr 2022 08:44

Thanks, John. Much appreciated.

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John Botterill

Thu 14th Apr 2022 21:46

I loved the denouement Stephen. Perfect! 😎

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 14th Apr 2022 17:49

Thanks to both of you, Bethany and New Shoes, for the very kind comments. They are really appreciated.

And thanks to Tim, Greg, Rudyard, Holden, Stephen, K Lynn for liking this one.

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Thu 14th Apr 2022 16:53

I echo the comments made by new shoes

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New Shoes

Thu 14th Apr 2022 06:01

This piece is full of gratitude and appreciation.
A pleasant read!

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