A Sigh

The sigh of a skyscraper, 

born of the loneliness

of altitude, descends 

as a winter's breath 

upon the faces 

of finitude, mirrored

in every failed attempt

to conceal contempt

for impermanence; and 

the more forcible

the effort and impressive 

the result, the more 

fragility and aversion

are revealed in mortar

and in glass: our distaste 

for an inevitable demise

designed, though 

not out of malice, 

by none other than

entropy, the price, 

if you will, of being.

◄ Reluctant

Futility ►

Comments

Holden Moncrieff

Sun 17th Apr 2022 00:06

Thank you so much, John, I'm always grateful for your encouraging words! 😎

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John Botterill

Sat 16th Apr 2022 07:34

Brilliant poetry Holden! You have captured so much here. Awesome.
Loved the final two lines especially 😎

Holden Moncrieff

Sat 16th Apr 2022 02:25

Thank you so much, Stephen, your kind comment means a lot! 😊

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 15th Apr 2022 17:14

born of the loneliness
of altitude
Love that
Brilliant manipulation of words, as always Holden. 👏

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