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Families 

separated

Nerves are shattered 

understated 

Loved ones lost 

Devastated 

Scared to hug or go outside

Minds lost 

Suicide 

 

Coughs and sneezes 

Catch it 

Politicians chat shit

I'd rather clean up cat shit

Rules no news and that's it 

 

Child killers knife crime 

Husband kills his wife time 

Dont assume the men are fine 

Drinking smoking one more line 

 

Depression breeding lazy

Darker world it's crazy

 

Can't sleep he's wide awake 

Its light outside for God's sake 

How much can his body take 

The lock down thing it taught me 

Life is my own story 

Chapters lines and words 

And someday it will flash before me

And to my friends who never reached 40

This ones for you 

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◄ THIS LITTLE LIGHT OF MINE ..

JUST INCASE ►

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Angel whisperer indigo child x

Fri 29th Apr 2022 18:13

Thanks so much everyone xxx
I love seeing notifications telling me people have responded to my poems
Thankyou for the feedback x

Also Bethany thankyou for bringing awareness to the heartbreaking truth about Gary Newlove
Sending healing and strength to his family and all families destroyed because of violence and murder
Blessings to you too xxx

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Sun 17th Apr 2022 15:17

terrific rant type poem and if you dont mind I would like to bring to the notice of those who dont know about the gruesome death of a beloved family man called Gary Newlove beaten to death outside his own home while remonstrating with three young thugs vandalizing his wifes car and who apparently had a booze up in their cells to celebrate their early releases after just a twelve stretch one of them being described as exemplary! the pictures of Gary in his hospital bed brought tears to my eyes and so much anger in my heart

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Russell Jacklin

Fri 15th Apr 2022 15:41

Wow, sentiment and rhythm, superb

Jodie mcnee

Fri 15th Apr 2022 06:45

Incredible x

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