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Oarless

Spectate the spasmodic

gasps for life 

of an episodic

unreality, the kind

that offers elixirs

in exchange for 

souls on the precipice, 

without an oar, 

ready to surrender

their mores, so long as

Horus agrees to bless

a sliver more 

of their voyage, 

while they stay blind

to his eye that glints 

the truth: that the boon

is merely pro tempore

probably not worth

a sacrifice of integrity. 

🌷(7)

◄ Futility

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Comments

Holden Moncrieff

Mon 25th Apr 2022 01:00

Thank you very much for the comment, Stephen, it's always appreciated! 😊

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 24th Apr 2022 16:21

Fascinating poem, Holden. Without a paddle, it seems, and perhaps up the creek, or worse.

Holden Moncrieff

Sun 24th Apr 2022 05:44

Thank you so much for your very kind comment, John, I'm truly grateful! 😊

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John Botterill

Sat 23rd Apr 2022 20:21

Ingenious poetry, Holden. There is a message for us all in this! 😀

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