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A History Lesson

As a child I found a stinking gas mask.

It consisted of decaying rubber and plastic.

Uncomfortable though it was, I tried it on,

Constricting my breathing.  As under a green sea, 

I saw my sister, smiling…

I didn’t keep it on for very long!

I flung it back into the drawer

With all the farthings and the ha’pennies

And a ration book, redundant relics

From the Second World War,

Which no one had got around

 To throwing away.

 

Our past accumulates.  It banks up

Like the soft rock strata in a coastal cliff.

Lower down in the drawer, had I but looked,

Were some pieces of scrimshaw

And battered old workhouse records,

A cavalry sword and a blunderbuss,

Some bows and arrows and a hard flint tool…

Tenacious tendrils of the roots which made us.

It’s not just a subject which we learn in school!

Whatever we do, whatever we say,

History clearly filters through,

Into every strand of our DNA.

 

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John Botterill

Wed 27th Apr 2022 21:03

Thanks for your super comment Stephen 😀 My gas mask was my fairer face, as Shakespeare didn't say haha!

Pam! You were supposed to keep our relationship a secret! Is nothing sacred? Thanks for pointing out that I stole from Larkin (unintentionally) as well as Owen! (deliberately) haha!

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 27th Apr 2022 20:55

It's fascinating how you describe your heritage layer by layer, John. This flows so well. I also found a gas mask when I was young, but it didn't really suit me.😀

Pamela Wall

Wed 27th Apr 2022 20:07

Definitely hints of Larkin 'it deepens as a coastal shelf.' It banks up like the soft strata.' Love it John. I can picture the drawer of objects although not quite so well stocked as I remember. After all I am 'the sister' 😲😜😜😊

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John Botterill

Wed 27th Apr 2022 19:58

Thanks Ursula and Stephen A. for your super comments! It means a great deal to have your appreciation. Glad I submitted it. 😀

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Stephen Atkinson

Wed 27th Apr 2022 17:11

Tenacious tendrils of the roots which made us...Lovely stuff.
Great writing, as always John!

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Wed 27th Apr 2022 16:31

That's just a brilliant poem, John. So clever and well thought out. So true, the past is part of what we are now. It is with us, even if we don't recognise it. Well done.👍

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John Botterill

Wed 27th Apr 2022 16:31

Wow, thanks Greg.

I'm pleased you found Larkin there. He is an influence so you'll be correct. I borrowed directly/ stole from Wilfred Owen in the line preceding my sister, as well haha

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Greg Freeman

Wed 27th Apr 2022 09:45

A fine poem, John, full of fascinating detail. I thought I detected an echo of Larkin, somewhere.

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