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Marion Braidfute (Wife of Braveheart)

Longshank’s Primae Noctis

Favoured sport of overlord

Returning sullied to my husband, crying,

I grasp his battle sword,

Our Lord this nicht has defiled me 

My virginity tooketh, not giv’n,

Let’s pledge undying hatred afor him

Ne’er shall he e’er be forgiv’n.

Let us seek our retribution, with this sword I will unbleed him

My flower may be stolen, but he’ll ne’er tak my freedom

🌷(7)

freedom

◄ 1967 Coniston Water

Debt Owed and Paid ►

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John Botterill

Sat 7th May 2022 14:36

Perfectly! 😁

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Russell Jacklin

Sat 7th May 2022 14:24

thank you John, hope it meets the brief

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John Botterill

Sat 7th May 2022 13:13

Epic poem, Russell. I really like the historical aspect!

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