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Afterlife

Many here will go to heaven,

Though some of us will go to hell.

These places stand on worlds apart,

But who does badly? Who does well?

 

We think that sinners should be sent

To purgatory down below,

But in a war all lines are blurred;

Good people may not even know

 

That they deserve an afterlife

Of peace and comfort and of joy,

While devils rise in our esteem

Through all the tricks which they employ.

 

When medals are distributed

And words of praise and censure said,

Our consciences will tip the wink

On where we go when we are dead.

🌷(6)

Ukraine

◄ Day 82

Glorious Mud ►

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 20th May 2022 16:29

Thank you, John. I think it's true that 'all lines are blurred in war'. Some people, even those on the 'wrong' side, seem to be able to reinvent themselves in peacetime.

And my thanks to Nigel, KJ, Julie, Holden and Kevin.

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John Botterill

Thu 19th May 2022 09:29

I like the way you tackle complex moral dilemmas Stephen and you are right, war does increase the complexity! Fine poem!

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