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PRACTISING FOR PEACE

With their shadowed brows and camouflaged stealth

soldiers are practising on the heath

as I awake, the put put of small arms fire

dotting the distance on the rutted scrubland

with sweeping views over Cove and Aldershot,

controlled aggression telling a staccato story

primeval dreams coming true

 

scattering the wildlife with their restless presence

likewise uniformed they try to blend,

and I take solace from distance

anticipating the next burst

juggling safety and threats

knowing that with their blanks

they practised for peace. 

🌷(4) 

â—„ WHERE THEY LOVE THE BIRMINGHAM ACCENT

LETTER TO BUCKINGHAM PALACE â–º

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raypool

Tue 31st May 2022 11:18

Thanks so much Nigel, Stephen Graham and Holden for appreciating this poem. I edited it to within an inch of its life.

Ray

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