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Life part 1

Life can not be better

          Than what's it now

I'm living my life happy

          No tensions on my brow

 

Life is great

           Being served well

On a golden platter 

          My pride gently swell

 

Life is all it can be 

          A box happy and sandy

None can bring anything better

          Neither sunshine nor glory

 

 

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Sunshine

Fri 17th Jun 2022 02:54

Thank you Nigel. I'm glad you liked it.

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Nigel Astell

Tue 14th Jun 2022 01:18

Love the lay out it works so well with this poem Moonlight.

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