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This old heart

I Want to Hold Your Hand.

The music of our youth plays

as we 60-somethings –

and then some –

squat and lunge,

walk on the spot,

step forward, then back.  

No arms above the shoulder

for the cardios.

 

I remember swiping

the demon fast bowler

for successive fours

before being clean-bowled.

A 400-yard relay

when no one overtook me.

The hat-trick

I scored before half-time.

(We lost 10-4).

 

Now even walking feels

a chore. That fall

in the street.

Don’t try and keep up

with the music, or with

the person next to you

if you don’t feel you can!

But Day Tripper.

And Ike and Tina Turner.

 

Those moments of glory.

An 80-something lady

makes my day, recalls

something my father

used to say.

The half-a-crown side.

I haven’t heard that in years,

not since he died.

Another class ends.

 

And we’re all still here!

 

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Comments

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 16th Jun 2022 23:18

Great to see this conversation in print Greg.
I’ve just been down for a chat with Dylan.
Speak soon.

G

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Greg Freeman

Thu 16th Jun 2022 09:22

Thanks for the comments, Steve and MC, and for the Likes, Nigel, Frederick, Holden, and Aisha. I've since discovered that 'the 80-something lady' mentioned in the poem is in fact 91!

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 15th Jun 2022 16:05

An involving vignette of the ways we face and adapt to the ageing process. This older heart wonders.......
How much truth
Returns from our youth
As we look over the shoulder
To when we were bolder.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 15th Jun 2022 09:37

Quietly inspirational, Greg. We all have to go onwards, but no harm in looking back.

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