I saw you standing there
I saw you waiting
in the light
stood there waiting
standing there
saw you in
the window's light
stood there facing
stood to stare
standing facing
to the light
from the windows
tall and bright
from the shopping
arcade's light
from the arcade's
neon glare
I saw you shopping
standing there
I saw you standing
shopping there
saw you with the
shopping there
In the arcade
window's glare
stood there standing
unaware
stood there standing
chestnut hair
watched by shoppers
stood to stare
bathed within the
window's light
before the windows
tall and bright
in the light just
standing there
you stood waiting
we stood there
all of us stood
standing there
I stood waiting
(with sisters there)
we all smiled
as mum stood there
she waved to us
as we waved to her.
(lmaginary event)
(Mum died in 1958.
Sisters Mally 5 yr and Tina 9 month, myself 3 yYr)
words and foto T Carroll
Bryony Partridge
Fri 7th Oct 2022 10:45
Really enjoyed this. It’s like a painting - the repetition is like brush strokes over the same bit of a picture, that all comes together evocatively. Great rhythm and emotion too.