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The road north

That tinderbox summer: underground fires’

subversive routes, breaking cover,

crackling heaths and pinewoods.

Blackened commons, smoke-cloaked motorway.

Sudden, meaningful quarrels; soon

you’d be heading north to university.

 

Fog-stalled autumn: drinks half-price

in freshers’ week, tempted by new flavours.

Down south I couldn’t start, awaited repairs.

Long, cross-country trips on stopping trains.

Returning late to a disapproving roommate;

something jeopardised, something gained.

 

Winter’s tale: clinging scent of the sugar factory,

ancient streets loaded with history

and pubs. My kinda town. Sneaking out of your room

before the cleaners came in. Year of the Cat

on the jukebox in the bus station bar.

Waiting for the overnight coach back south,

 

certain I’d soon be heading north for good,

job in the offing. I’d tracked you down.

 

🌷(8)

◄ Oh, Mr Porter

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Greg Freeman

Mon 1st Aug 2022 23:25

Thanks for your comments and memories, John and Graham. I've clearly struck a chord, by mentioning Al Stewart!

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 1st Aug 2022 10:00

Commenting from the Dordogne at 11am and 32c.

I love this Greg and the Al Stewart reference rings well today. My favourite line of his (from another song) was always…..

“It’s eighty degrees and I’m down on my knees in Brooklyn”

But we used to substitute Brooklyn for wherever we were at the time.

Great memories my friend

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John Botterill

Mon 1st Aug 2022 08:10

A fab poem, Greg. Glad you reposted it. Evocative of a time I remember well, my own university days in the years of the cat. 😀👍

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Greg Freeman

Sat 30th Jul 2022 09:10

I'm sure this is not the first occasion I've posted this poem here, but thought I would again because of the parallels between this summer and 1976 - not least because I and my then-girlfriend are contemplating moving north again! It was first published by Stairwell Press in an anthology titled simply York many moons ago, an anthology that was co-curated by John Coopey, I believe. It can also be found in my full collection Marples Must Go!, published last year and now available - at last - online from Waterstone's https://www.waterstones.com/book/marples-must-go/tony-earnshaw//9781913329501

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