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Tanks

Through the spectral quiet

Of this deserted place,

The tanks go rolling by

In their odd little race.

 

It’s hardly a surprise

That they proceed so fast;

There’s nothing here to see,

Since that almighty blast.

 

So as they disappear

Along the dusty road,

The silence will renew

Its dark, despondent load.

Ukraine

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 2nd Aug 2022 17:11

My thanks to Nigel and K Lynn.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 1st Aug 2022 17:05

Thanks, John B. I wonder if tanks can be booked for speeding, or worse ('could you blow into this, sir?'). It would take someone brave to do it - Clint Eastwood is too long in the tooth.

Thankyou, John C and Greg. Yes, there is a sense of Ukraine fatigue around, but I will try to keep posting. Among all the tragedy and horror, there is an element of the ridiculous e.g. The Russian Naval (navel?) Parade yesterday, to keep spirits up.

Thanks for the Nicola Jennings' cartoon link, Greg. Don't put your hand anywhere near there!

And thanks to Keith, Jon, Julie, Stephen and Holden for liking this.

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John Coopey

Mon 1st Aug 2022 09:17

Bravo, Stephen. There is pall of Ukraine fatigue setting in so I agree with Greg - keep posting.

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Greg Freeman

Mon 1st Aug 2022 09:11

I never know what to say about your Ukraine poems any more, Steve, except to say thanks for keeping going with them, and making each one different, and so effective. But there's this cartoon, by someone I used to work with ,https://www.theguardian.com/commentisfree/picture/2022/jul/31/nicola-jennings-on-the-russian-blockade-of-ukraines-grain-exports

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John Botterill

Mon 1st Aug 2022 07:49

You capture the scenes we all watch on TV perfectly, Stephen. I particularly liked 'odd little race'. The whole thing is utterly bizarre, isn't it?

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