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Sandcastles

Who will look at my photographs,

When my time on this earth is gone?

Who will shine my cups and medals,

When my final sun has shone?

 

A journey to the council tip,

Will neatly dispose of my stuff.

Records of the money I earned,

Which was never quite enough…

 

Life, flattened like a sandcastle,

Washed away by the incoming tide.

Some will have memories, but they will fade

In the nothing that is left behind.

 

 

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John Botterill

Mon 15th Aug 2022 21:50

Thanks so much for your lovely comment. It means a lot, Stephen 😀 I was inspired, if that's the right word, by getting rid of some of mum's junk. She is still with us, thankfully!

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Stephen Atkinson

Mon 15th Aug 2022 18:39

A sad reflective piece reminiscent of many of us! Written with great style (of course)😉🌈

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John Botterill

Mon 15th Aug 2022 17:41

Thanks Stephen for your comment. I plumbed new depths of misery with this one 😣 😊
Thanks for the likes Holden, Julie and Frederick

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 15th Aug 2022 16:27

'Flattened like a sandcastle' is a haunting image, John. I loved the rhythm and rhyme.

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