The Banishment From the Garden
The Banishment from the Garden |
The Garden of Eden and the Fall of Man,
The Lord looked down and saw man |
The Banishment from the Garden |
The Garden of Eden and the Fall of Man,
The Lord looked down and saw man |
HI Tomas, This is a nice poem, very biblical, and always good for a reminder.thanks
<Deleted User> (4281)
Sun 6th Apr 2008 04:12
Hello Tomas ~ this poem is excellent, very profound. You based this write on the truth from the Bible, which is so good to read. Adam and Eve story in a Garden of Eden well written. The picture makes your poem complete.
Great write!
Zuzanna
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<Deleted User> (4597)
Mon 7th Apr 2008 21:41
"The truth from the Bible" - a questionable statement.
The poem would probably be better without rhyme.
;)