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The bard of Cymdonkin Drive

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Caitlin said in a TV interview

he sometimes spent hours

in the writing shed, only

to emerge with one line

after all that work.

 

The radio voice portentous,

everyone’s idea of a poet. 

Words that were musical, inspirational,

with no one quite sure

what exactly they meant.

 

A bard that pulled the birds

and drank like a fish. Why

did he get so pissed?

Was it to obliterate the guilt,

that all his stuff was just guff,

 

you know, dare I say it, rubbish?

I can’t believe that I’m writing this.

 

 

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john short

Sat 17th Sep 2022 11:29

Funny I was thinking the same thing myself only yesterday. What if it were all just 'beautiful crap' as Larkin termed it (referring to something of his own btw.). It seems blasphemous to have such thoughts.

John S

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Greg Freeman

Fri 26th Aug 2022 20:07

Thanks for your comments, Steve and John. And for the Likes, Nigel, Frederick and Rudyard. I know many people love Dylan Thomas.

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John Botterill

Thu 25th Aug 2022 22:11

I like the debunking element, Greg. Great writing is in the mind of the reader, I think.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 25th Aug 2022 08:18

It's a point of view, Greg. I seem to remember someone saying that he sounded too English to be Welsh and too Welsh to be English. Perhaps that's why he liked America, where he could get up everything you describe.
A really interesting read, even if slightly tongue in cheek, I suspect!

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