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A PITIFUL SOUL

Born into darkness

a life unanchored

severed from reason

 

strangely unreal

to himself a threat

to others an enigma

 

and variations on a theme

as yet not worked out

and little hope of it. 

 

And how should we feel for such:

should it be disgust

or perhaps pity, sorrow at least

 

If we look hard we may see

some unhinging of purpose

a vast limitation imposed

 

a waste of a life that could have been fruitful

but we move on until out of sight

draw the curtains against that fading light. 

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Flyntland

Tue 30th Aug 2022 16:44

Thank you for your welcome - this is my second time round - so I sort of know the ropes.

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raypool

Mon 29th Aug 2022 22:39

Many thanks for reading and liking Frederick, Kevin, Jordyn, Stephen and Holden.

Welcome Flyntland, very pleased you got this idea. It came out in a rush.

Thanks for stopping by Stephen, always kind.

Ray

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 27th Aug 2022 17:05

A powerful piece of verse, Ray.

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Flyntland

Sat 27th Aug 2022 11:45

Powerful imagery - haunting - realistic - and oh! so very sad.

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