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64-bit world

1

 

words can carry with them a certain weird

emptiness the poison enamel

of this sole-fuelled exterior reality 
the blandest constrained phrase like
the sound that began the Earth
the sanest gateway

in a muddy forest of grief-laughing

and transient unstable compulsions 
somehow sacred maybe
from another time a resonance 
the sound of voices from the little Saturn box
menacing bellows there is no greater peace

 

2

walking through the wild of society as if
through tracing paper standards 
the most basic interaction 
like a hall of mirrors but with Mind
in a 64-bit world

with unknowable etiquette

🌷(3)

◄ some gods want us bloody

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keith jeffries

Sat 3rd Sep 2022 21:32

Superb. I love the words "transient unstable compulsions somehow sacred maybe from another time a resonance". In this poem I feel a sense of the original creation and a reaction to it. Maybe I am mistaken but still impressed with the quality of thought given to it.
Thank you for this
Keith

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