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1954

Her voice still shrills down through the years

sharp with accusations - -

- - but confident in the knowledge

of her right to be right.

 

Discouraging ambitions

was a parental duty,

 

Knowing ones place was duly taught

firmly blocking any rebelliouse thought.

 

"Girl remember you're a servant

don't step above your station

your working class  -

you don't need an education

just to marry and have babies"

 

She taught us well by example,

standng at the shallow stone sink

scouring Woolworth's pans

with red work roughened hands.

 

"Reading isn't good for you

it tires out the brain

you must learn to clean and scrub

so get upon your knees

Girl its just elbow grease you need"

 

She scrubbed worn greasy collars

then started on the cuffs

peering through the steam

and hoping they were clean.

 

"Now just you mark my words girl

listen to what I say

you are what you are born to

its always been this way"

🌷(8)

◄ PROGRESSION

SPINDRIFT ►

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Flyntland

Fri 9th Sep 2022 07:47

Thank you John - it is good to get such encouraging comments.

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John Botterill

Thu 8th Sep 2022 20:16

Stunning poem, Flyntland. I love the voice which comes through within this poem and the truth it speaks. 💪

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Flyntland

Thu 8th Sep 2022 19:01

to Adam Whitworth and Russell Jacklin Thanks for taking the time to read and like,
and to Stephen Gospage, I do so hope that it never happens again. It causes personal torment and lifelong frustration, todays young would, quite rightly, not accept it quietly.
I find that writting my poems relieves my anger and frustration.

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 8th Sep 2022 17:18

A great poem. Thank you. We should be careful, or these attitudes might be making a comeback.

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Flyntland

Thu 8th Sep 2022 09:25

My thanks to Frederick, John, Stephen and Holden for your likes.
This poem is not imaginary and the conversation took place when I was fourteen, a year before I left school. I learnt my place.

I thoght that this attitude no longer existed untill heard, in an interview with the Prince of Wales, the phrase "maintaining the natural order" mentioned twice by him. I know my place.

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