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A Poem for Elizabeth

 

This day is done

let hands blushed blue with care

lay down the sceptre and the crown

cast off the mantle drawn so tight

round shoulders once too young, 

and now too old to bear

this velvet tapestry of life, the gold, the red

the thread of all you did and were

is now complete 

to hang upon some dusty wall.

 

And I wonder at the sacrifices made

the love affairs you never had

the tongues that never wagged

the un-lived life now taken to the grave

that you were never your father's joy

but ever his pride.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Stephen Atkinson

Fri 16th Sep 2022 18:39

An eloquent, beautiful piece, isobel 🌈

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Isobel

Fri 16th Sep 2022 17:09

Thank you so much for your comments.

I was influenced by reading somewhere once that Margaret was King George's joy, whilst Elizabeth was his pride.

I was chatting about Simon Armitage's poem to my daughter when she challenged me to write one last night. It takes a lot to get the cogs whirring nowadays but I think reading other people's poems on the subject has helped. Didn't manage to get any lilies in there though!

Would I have wanted the Queen's life, with all her money and privilege? Not on your Nelly.


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Graham Sherwood

Fri 16th Sep 2022 16:18

First of all it's brilliant to see you posting again Izzy!

These lines could have stood on their own they are so good!

'this velvet tapestry of life, the gold, the red
the thread of all you did and were
is now complete
to hang upon some dusty wall'.

For goodness sake keep posting!

G

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Flyntland

Fri 16th Sep 2022 10:22

this poem is written with a gentle empathy - well away from pomp and ceremony - a private poem to a private women. Thank you.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 16th Sep 2022 08:38

I find this quite magical, Isobel. The idea of duty as self-denial, of missing out on things, with death a kind of relief, the casting off of a burden. A great piece.

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