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Suburbia

Low-lit suburbia,

With its boxed excitement,

Suited her mood right now.

She lived a silent life

Of genteel disaster

And spent her afternoons

In cafés with her cups,

Deep in the corridor

Of her mind’s memories.

A kiss in a car park,

Which could have changed her life

(But which changed someone else’s),

Still haunted her at nights,

When darkness stole her dreams.

🌷(7)

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 9th Oct 2022 21:28

Thankyou for the kind compliment, Flyntland, and for your generous comment, Pete. Suburbs can be lonely places and one incident can change your life.
Thanks to Uilleam, Jock and Contemporary Soul for the likes, and to Frederick and Holden.

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Pete (edbreathe)

Sun 9th Oct 2022 00:12

Love the emotion in this , brought by few words.

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Flyntland

Sat 8th Oct 2022 19:55

This poem has an Eleanor Rigby feel to it - lonely and anonymous.

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