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The Greatest Sadness

The Greatest Sadness

A life now gone, forever no more
Taken by the person on whom,
It was so, preciously bestowed upon
The reason never understood,
Unless having there once stood

At first, the mind-numbing, utter shock
Then endless, unanswerable questions
The grave sense of confusion, guilt and anger,
A whole wrath of conflicting, unhelpful emotions,
To this, the saddest of all preventable reactions

A bitter reflection of an out of touch, uncaring society
A hungrily hounding, headlining, money driven economy
Having higher priorities over the well-being of others you see
Showing wilful neglect, leading to this final end, so untimely

Whose only ever half-hearted response is to,
Numb and dumb down any despairing reaction
Leading to greater hopelessness and increased isolation
No longer seeing any way out or where to fast forward
Until, finally reduced to taking the ultimate decision
To leave, without knowing any worldly remaining reason

A life now gone, never to return
Never to reach its natural conclusion
Without ever knowing its full potential
And for which, we shall forever mourn

Be Kind

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 11th Oct 2022 18:05

It is hope and the casual disregard for our eventual demise that
makes existence bearable...We are gifted time and it's down to
us how we value it and what we do with it.
We start life's journey with a breath
And end it breathless with a death.

Jock Strapp Jr

Mon 10th Oct 2022 19:05

ditto-bigtime!

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 10th Oct 2022 17:17

A very moving, thoughtful piece, Doug.

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