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Revenge

It’s strange how we view war from far away.

Distance lends itself to rage and anger,

To dollops of easy indignation,

Fuelled by being powerless, I suppose.

For those on the spot, it’s the practical,

The workaday, which occupies the mind:

Filling in the forms, feeding survivors,

Visiting hospital, booking the hearse.

The task of clearing out dead neighbours’ homes

Damps down the anger. At least for a while,

Because it remains: circling, festering,

Nagging at your conscience, and competing

With the grief and numbness of your mourning.

One day, its revenge will be terrible.

🌷(7)

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 20th Oct 2022 21:44

Thanks also to Julie, John and Bethany for liking this poem.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 18th Oct 2022 16:50

Holden and Flyntland - I am so grateful for your kind ans supportive comments. I was pleased with this poem but of course it saddens me enormously. One hopes that revenge not be the order of the day and that compassion and forgiveness will prevail, but there is only so much that people can take.

Thanks to Frederick and K Lynn for liking.

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Flyntland

Tue 18th Oct 2022 10:30

I don't know what to say - I can't better Holdens comment - he has got it absolutly right.

"One day, it's revenge will be terrible" is frightening.

I would also like to add that the poem itself is very well put together - every line is relevent.

Holden Moncrieff

Tue 18th Oct 2022 02:29

A truly profound poem, Stephen! The "dollops of easy indignation" and "the anger...competing with the grief and numbness of your mourning" are such eloquent and incisive descriptions of hard-to-articulate emotions! 🌷

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