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Mountain People

The mountain people speak in quiet tones;

Their language is concise, their speech is brief.

Beneath the precipice, in ice-thinned air,

Their words are chosen carefully. No slack

Is tolerated; any long-winded,

Fancy prattle is a stranger to them.

Visitors will be welcomed and advised

To take the shortest route, while the light lasts;

If not, hospitality is arranged,

With self-explanation as the watchword.

Yet these are friendly people, warm inside,

Whose terseness is a camouflage, a mask.

At night, round warm fires, their hearts will sing;

The song soaring upwards, toward the peaks.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 22nd Oct 2022 17:09

My thanks to Frederick, Steve, Stephen, Holden, Julie, Flyntland and Helène for liking this one. I have always been fascinated by remote communities and how their attitudes develop.

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