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Dystopic.

Mellifluous cajoling in a descant, 

a coercion cloaked that revokes

the privilege of that Eighfold Path, 

only to throw one into the cavern 

where the curative ceases to be lucrative, 

the mean no longer shines in gold,

stuck on the continuum of delirium, 

traipsing across an Eden of yore, 

trailing along your freshly leaden core...

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John Marks

Wed 26th Oct 2022 18:31

‘ “Until they become conscious they will never rebel, and until after they have rebelled they cannot become conscious.” Orwell, 1984.

It is the unackowledged, middle-of-the-road dystopia that terrifies me.

Holden Moncrieff

Thu 20th Oct 2022 23:28

Thank you so much, Stephen, your kind comment truly means a lot! 😊

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 20th Oct 2022 21:22

This has a topical ring to it, Holden: 'the continuum of delerium'.
Splendidly written as usual.

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