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Waiting, again

Life is but a waking dream,

Surrounded by a fitful sleep.

We stagger around, to get Life started,

But it’s over, before it’s begun.

Me? I’ve been ambushed by the setting sun.

 

What, then, shall I say of this day?

That I lived, I loved, I met with friends,

But Mr Godot did not come,

Even though I waited,

Waited until the very end.

 

Mr Godot: he sees me from above,

A deity of parental love…

“Ah! My son is sleeping yet,

I shall wake him in a little while.

He’ll tell me of all the troubles he’s got!

Some dreams he may have remembered,

But most of them, he will have forgot!”

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John Botterill

Fri 6th Jan 2023 07:43

Thanks so much Holden. Your comment is great and means a lot to me 👍
Thanks for the like Manish.

Holden Moncrieff

Fri 6th Jan 2023 03:04

A brilliant, profound poem, John! "Me? I've been ambushed by the setting sun" is a superb line! 😎

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John Botterill

Thu 5th Jan 2023 18:32

Thanks for the likes Frederick, Purplemoon and Helene. 😀

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John Botterill

Wed 4th Jan 2023 22:06

Happy New Year, Stephen. You are very kind, always! 😊
Thanks for the like too, Stephen A

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 4th Jan 2023 21:26

Happy New Year, John. This poem is a great start. A delicate web of tales about life.

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