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Surrender

Splash! I slipped into the frightening abyss of love

Paddling for dear life, anxious butterflies played merrily

Unaware of the fright and determination to bring you near.

Terrified you held my aching body, weary and battered,

With a softness attentive to my hurried breath,

Calming warmth that rendered me into a stillness,

Suspended in a God like state I am motionless,

In awe of the simplicity hypocritical to my beliefs,

You held me in your presence in the absence of words,

A veil clothed my earthly cynicism,

In the depths of who you are, I found the depths of me.

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◄ I Will Remember

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Melinda Mills

Sun 8th Jan 2023 03:49

Thank you so much Bethany and Rose, I appreciate your encouragement and support. 😃

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Fri 6th Jan 2023 22:14

I totally agree with Rose. Thank you Melinda.

<Deleted User> (9882)

Wed 4th Jan 2023 22:46

Melinda I KNEW you were going to do very well on this site and you have started to prove it with this great piece-well done girl!

keep writing!




Rose 💋

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