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A child-shaped void in our lives

This woman, my wife, unable to carry life

Unable to bear the fruits of our love.

Not her fault

Mine,

Seedless as a Naval orange.

Brokenhearted, we parted.

 

Roll forward several years

This woman hereof became my ladylove,

Already a mum, could I think of

These boys as

Mine,

We considered our future.

Hand in hand, we planned.

 

Roll forward several years

Those young men, reborn again

Gratefully, I received prerogative rights to

Grandchildren,

Mine,

There’s no greater gift that could uplift

Any future, except to share in theirs.

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grandchildren

◄ The Siberian Tiger

The Spare ►

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John Botterill

Mon 9th Jan 2023 21:53

A wonderful moving poem written with great skill and style. Fabulous, JD. I love the photo, too. Being a Grandad is a rare privilege.💪

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Russell Jacklin

Mon 9th Jan 2023 14:43

😊👍

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Mon 9th Jan 2023 14:41

Sometimes I'm tempted to succumb to being Granddad grumpy guts, then I read a piece such as yours JD, and I remember just how fortunate I am, and not to take what I have for granted.😊

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