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All I Needed

I have hoped from identity to identity.

Searching for the one fit for my skin.

Beat myself up on body features I got.

Wishful thinking of beauty, ooh my God.

I didn’t know, self-esteem is what I needed.

 

I listened to any adult, in search of wisdom.

Doubtful of my thinking against conformity.

I learned that ignorant adults do teach too.

Inducing their views on keenly enthusiasts.

I didn’t know, mentors are what I needed.

 

I have worked competitively to earn love.

I got swept into feeling down on each fail.

The affections I proved for never lasted.

I realized being loved right was a response.

I didn’t know, acceptance is what I needed.

◄ Grooming The King

The Noisy Silence ►

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Chihinga Chakatali

Fri 10th Mar 2023 06:01

😎💗 Thank you all for the uplifting comments. I appreciate it!

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 9th Mar 2023 14:51

Hello Lucas.
I'd say: don't conform unthinkingly.
Always question. Always dissent.

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keith jeffries

Thu 9th Mar 2023 13:43

Lucas, another excellent poem in which you delve into yourself to find answers. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. What one man considers to be ugly another is attracted to. Listen to the wise for good counsel but tell yourself that you a fine upright man and never let the opinions of others have an adverse on you. This poem is about outward appearances which many people are tormented by. It is the inner person where the real person lies.
Your poem is an outpouring of the self and very well written
Keith

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Hélène

Thu 9th Mar 2023 12:00

Really really good. Loved this poem, Lucas. Wise & inspiring, a journey of self-awareness.

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