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Spoken breath

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She offered him a peach

he looked at the stars instead

The winking of a thousand suns

Wrote verse inside his head.

She lifted a burning ember

As lightning to his tread

Her searching smile

Of knowing thoughts

She claimed with nothing

said.

 

(He folded gently

the written memory

of her penned lips,

that in silence,

said more

than spoken breath.)

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Tommy Carroll

Sun 22nd Oct 2023 20:19

words & image Tommy Carroll

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 23rd Mar 2023 21:34

Brilliant poem, Tommy. Every line must be savoured.

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 23rd Mar 2023 11:19

Thanks Tommy.
I love those last 6 lines.

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