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I Want My Forever Back.

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You took my heart

Like one takes a book

From the library

You never told me

I was on a return

 

I gave you my heart

Naively 

Imagined forever

Without an end

 

What is this?

I’ve found a pile of library hearts

All with date stamps 

Some even have fine notices attached 

 

You didn’t even bother

To take them back

You just left them scattered;

Covered in dust

 

I think you are spineless

I want my forever relinquished

You seem to have judged me by my cover

Never felt the need

To read between the lines

 

If you had …

You would have realised

I am a rare edition

Sought after by many

So you best get me to the library

Before they notice

I am missing. 

C.K. 23

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Comments

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John Botterill

Wed 19th Apr 2023 04:46

Another classic, Classic. Sardonic humour with style. Love it!

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Manish Singh Rajput

Mon 17th Apr 2023 04:29

I loved the metaphorical representation of a library and a book to that of person and her heart. Thank you for this.

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keith jeffries

Sun 16th Apr 2023 20:16

The analogy and irony a perfectly matched. A superb poem.
Thank you for this
Keith

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