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The Agony of Separation

The Agony of Separation

 

Soldiers struggle along trenches and through undergrowth,

as the enemy waits armed with pensive anticipation.

Cold weather dampens their spirits and will to fight,

at home their families lay cradled in fear as missiles fall near.

 

One lives with the hope that the other still lives,

as contact is infrequent and painfully thin.

Darkness is a part of their underground refuge,

blankets for warmth are wrapped around their tormented frames.

 

The trench is home, a transitory maze of mud,

day and night alert they hear a distant thud.

A family photo, an amulet and the occasional prayer,

with meagre rations and little to spare.

 

Children hold their mothers tight in fear and fright,

in the glimmer of a dimmed small candle light.

They too eat cold food for limited strength,

hope on hope some relief will soon be sent.

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 30th Apr 2023 08:40

I like the way that you emphasise the similarity of some aspects of the plight of soldiers and their families. A very strong war poem, Keith.

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kJ Walker

Sun 30th Apr 2023 07:46

An apt description of the futility of war
, And that effect it has on soldiers and their families.

Could refer to many conflicts, but I've a feeling that it is about one happening right now.

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 29th Apr 2023 21:14

Thanks Keith.

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Manish Singh Rajput

Sat 29th Apr 2023 17:42

Great set of vocabulary, imagery and depth of emotions.
Thank you.

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John Botterill

Sat 29th Apr 2023 17:40

Told with both imagination and an honest assessment of how it must be. Thanks for this fine poem, Keith.

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