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Deciduous.

A decimated psalm

and a petulant pilgrim, 

salvaged perhaps, 

by an astral map

leading far away 

from plaster saints, 

but not to neverlands, 

rather to wandering

and wonderment:

tiptoeing around 

galaxies, indulging in

the spirit of anarchists, 

only to reveal 

the deciduous idyll

didn't really fool you;

it's the wisdom of Yggdrasil

to shed some leaves

and ask: what roots you?

◄ Captainless.

Soothsayer. ►

Comments

Holden Moncrieff

Sun 18th Jun 2023 16:41

Thank you so much, John, you're extremely kind, and your wonderful words are a genuine source of encouragement! 😎

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John Botterill

Sun 18th Jun 2023 09:02

Ive just found this masterpiece, Holden, and I am so glad I did. As you so often do, you have expressed complex ideas in a clever, approachable way. The imagery is stunningly good. 😎

Holden Moncrieff

Sat 17th Jun 2023 00:26

Thank you so much for the thoughtful comment, Kevin, I really appreciate it! 😊

Holden Moncrieff

Thu 15th Jun 2023 14:13

Thank you so much, Uilleam, you make an excellent point! 😉

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 15th Jun 2023 09:34

Thank you Holden.
Now in my old age, I'd much prefer Yggdrasil to the plaster saints of my youth any day.

Holden Moncrieff

Thu 15th Jun 2023 04:58

Thank you so much, Manish, your lovely comment truly means a lot! 😊

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Manish Singh Rajput

Thu 15th Jun 2023 04:34

A superb poem, Holden. I learn a lot through your poems, especially the vocabularies and the deep messages.
Thank you so much.

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