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BLANK SLATE

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(For Clare)

It’ll take the breath clean out of you
When you think the implications through.
Tabula Rasa: blank slate:
No memory, no desire,
Nothing to bend you in any direction,
Nothing to send you lower,
Noithing to lift you higher..
No future envisaged
No presience required
No past to forget
Nothing for sale and nothing to let.
No genetic predisposition
No-one to speak to and nothing to regret
No-one to listen.
A new human. Being is all.
Not doing, not making, with  nothing to recall,
High windows in an empty hall
I'm setting off in free-fall.

 

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John Marks

Sat 24th Jun 2023 22:57

Me too. "Poetry is the journal of the sea animal living on land, wanting to fly in the air. Poetry is a search for syllables to shoot at the barriers of the unknown and the unknowable. Poetry is a phantom script telling how rainbows are made and why they go away." Carl Sandburg, The Atlantic, 1927.

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Clare

Wed 21st Jun 2023 19:27

Wow! You just made me cry! 😯

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John Marks

Wed 21st Jun 2023 18:26

Yes Clare this poem is dedicated to you and your poetry! To be a poet you need talent and much dedication: no payment is offered, no vast sales are made, no public recognition occurs. Bad poets make the simple complex, they are wordy, good poets make the complex simple, they are poetic: "Poetry is what in a poem makes you laugh, cry, prickle, be silent, makes your toe nails twinkle, makes you want to do this or that or nothing, makes you know that you are alone in the unknown world, that your bliss and suffering is forever shared and forever all your own." ~Dylan Thomas

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Clare

Wed 21st Jun 2023 08:57

Me? ☺️

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