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Mad thoughts

Many man have said a interesting thing or two 

One small step and I have a dream comes to mind 

But it's early-ish in the morning and am struggling for inspiration things are falling apart

My mind's tried and spirit is fading 

Oh maybe my heart be taken or do I just believe in to many silly ideas

Maybe I should have a dream 

Maybe I should go to the moon I might get some space there 

Cause am slowly turning into a headcase

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◄ Where do I go

Don't fancy it ►

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 22nd Jun 2023 11:18

You should listen to Sinatra singing "Come Fly With Me" - a
zesty pick-me-up for the spirit when feeling trapped by the downside of life. There's so much out there fo kick the mind
into gear and set the imagination in motion! Sammy Cahn's
words sung so effortlessly by FS form a poem in its own right
against the bouncy upbeat Billy May arrangement. 😍

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Keith Byrne

Thu 22nd Jun 2023 10:56

Thanks for comments I just write I don't have any theme or subject in mind just what going on in my mind out the time. So when people get something out of it it means so much thank you Keith and uilleam.

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 22nd Jun 2023 10:28

Follow you heart and your deams Keith.

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keith jeffries

Thu 22nd Jun 2023 09:54

Keith, a poem which speaks of being on the brink of despair. A stress ridden society has its casualties which are many. Perhaps a different perspective on life is called for; a radical change of direction. Your words are clear and their message resonates loud and clear.
Thanks for this,
Keith

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