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leaving for the summer

everyones leaving for the summer. 

outside car doors slam and girls with long blonde hair, 

grin at their sisters and hug their brothers.

books bundled high in stricken arms. 

no tears, they're just leaving for the summer. 

open windows to air out the spring, the old. 

rucksacks bursting with new tshirts. 

i watch from an opened window on the third floor, 

i need the air to breathe and i like to hear the sound of lives. 

i wish i knew them, wish i could leave for the summer with them. 

 

 

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Russell Jacklin

Sat 8th Jul 2023 14:55

Poetry is at its best when the reader can visualise the images portrayed and imagine the emotion. This is such a poem. Beautiful

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